So many words in this story but one of the word made a house in my brain is 'barbaric.' Thanks for the semi-barbaric king. When I read this story, what I remember was what is going on the story. After I did rewriting progress, I remembered many thing. People's feeling, why the man loved princess, how the semi-barbaric king made the arena. The more information can make better story ending. I wrote first ending story when I read this book. Now I will rewrite it again. Thanks for the semi-barbaric king again and you. Good luck for the poor man and the princess. I know she is genius because she is a princess of one country.
"And then he felt something waterish." -JH in class, describing an episode of a tv show
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